Wednesday, May 7, 2008

Draft for a high action, high octane touge chase and fight

I've been meaning to write out a plot for a fast touge in Malaysia, since most of our local race movies are plotless and sucky. So I hope anyone who knows a director, could refer my story to them and hope a great movie to be made. I've discussed with TK about it, so I decided to write it down on words. Here it is:

Intro 

Flashy credits

Modifying car scene

3 Satria Neos  -> modified with high output engine revving

Flashback (use slightly orange tint on camera to signify past)

Drug import from Thailand

Keeps them in store house

Traitor in the group, informs rival gang about drugs

Storehouse broken in by rival gang, killing guards

Rival gang takes off with the drugs, then left dead people in the storehouse

Calls the cops about the breaking in

Cops seeks for the drug owner being the name in the lease

Owner hides and disappears from public

Realises been set up and betrayed

Hires other gang members to follow his other gang leaders.

Found out the traitor, but brings him into the plan

Known that the rival gang lord is trying to purify the money, by hiring an expert gambler

They realized they needed fast cars.

They planned to steal some fast exotic cars from the local (NAZA) showroom. One guy drives off a Porsche off the window pane, however, due to lack of gas, he has to flea from the car. So his plan was foiled

They realized they had to come up with another plan, where they thought of stealing a trailer loaded with new cars. They thought it would be great to steal a truck from Proton

Takes out 3 brand new proton satria neo and sold other cars for spare parts to fund the satria neos with turbo.

On to take back money plan

Money is planned to be sent thru armoured trucks, sent to Genting. Whilst unloading the money, they plan to lure them with girls

Girls will then sexually distract them, while their male counterparts hits them with a weapon.

Unloads all the money and stashes it into 3 satria neo’s

Drives down quickly when the expert gambler isn’t expecting his money

He calls, finds out no one answering, runs towards the armoured car, money found stolen.

Calls the cops, cops were alerted and chases the satria neos, since they were seen speeding out from cctv footage.

The satria neo loses them, near the midpoint roundabout with another decoy satria neo with same number plates.

Decoys run towards the karak highway, where the other cars run thru ulu yam.

Decoys were caught when they were surrounded near the karak toll gate.

Found out they were decoys. Realized they been tricked.

Cars heading towards ulu yam, loads their money in another truck and abandons their neo near the lake near ulu yam

Gets a call from the rival gang boss, knowing that “someone precious” is held hostage, tells him to come alone

Gang leader tells other members to leave, while he rescues that person

Gang leader shows up, then seeing “special” being tied up and being threatened with a knife by another guy.

He sees himself surrounded by other guys, who tries to apprehend him. Then he fights back. Then his other gang members came. Massive fight.

The gang boss gets nervous, pulls the hostage away and threatens to kill if they don’t leave and drop the gun

Whilst droping the gun on the floor, he reaches his knife near his shoes and tosses it at the other gang member. Then the other gang members shot the other gang lord

Knowing so much commotion, the police came and then told them to stop, as they were surrounded. They were handcuffed, and the police chief asks that if it is worth it?

Then the leader says, yes, anything for brothers.

The end

2 comments:

ScAvEnGeR said...

This plot sounds like something that can only happen in M'sia. Dang!

Should be a hit with the local community :)

Azuri said...

kev, make it shorter.. about 15-30 minutes approximately running time.. then we can shoot this short indie movie.. hehehe...

:D